domingo, 18 de diciembre de 2011

FIRST CHAPTER (NOVEL)

Hi everyone! This is the very FIRST chapter of a novel I started. I hope you like it! The next chapter will come very soon, cause really these are just the first pages to introduce the characters and stuff won't really begin to happen until further chapters. So please be patient! haha just kidding!
Well, here it goes, please tell me what you think of it. Sorry for the English, I'm from Spain and I try my best!
Remember my twitter is @AndreaaBiebeer :)


I made my way to high school after leaving home. I must confess I was pretty nervous at


the moment. I hadn't really thought about what would mean coming back after a long 


summer. That summer had been one of the best so far. At last my parents let me out a bit


more.

But I now I had to face a moment that I somehow feared, something that would certainly


attack my nerves and would let them come out. It was going to be one of those days I 


wouldn't stay still for a second.


I would see them all again. My two best friends, Carol and Lucy; my whole class, my


teachers.



And... Well, just everyone.



As I walked I thought what kind of face should I put when I entered the class. The thing is, I


was happy to see everybody. But of course, in a school with more than 200 people, I guess


you can't like everyone. These kind of people were those who you eouldn't understand the 


reason they would come to school.The kind of people who have too much money, so


much, they could spend their whole lives without moving, cause their dear daddies would


give the little princess anything she asked for.



I suppose you all know someone like this, but in this case I am refering to the devil in


person, Mary. And don't forget about her two henchwomen: Carly and Kate. Seriously, I


have never understood, and never will, how someone can become the shadow of another


person just because of the money and popularity she has.



I was nearly there. I could see the top part of the orange building I had at the corner.


When I turned left, I stopped. I couldn't believe it. ¡Mary already had another guy! She had


chosen well. He was a tall guy, blond, brown eyes. He wasn't spanish. He'd probably be a


student who would spend a few days in Spain, and she had already gone for him. That


meant she was over with Alex.



To be honest, I didn't want Mary to be the very first thing I saw when I arrived, but, ¿what


can I say? Destiny wanted so. I looked away, I didn't want to stare at Mary and the new guy


sharing their “love”.



I saw Carol and Lucy at the high school door. We had met there, and I was the last one to 


arrive, as always. The fact of being late was something I was determined to change this 


year. I had not started really well.



Even though I walked straight on without looking at Mary, I could feel how her eyes 


watched me, which was totally uncomfortable.



When I reached the door, the first thing I did was to hug Lucy and Carol. The hug was so 


strong we had to let go to be able to breathe. I was really happy to see them.



“Girls! You can't imagine how much I missed you since your birthday, Lucy. How are you? I


couldn't wait to see you.”



Lucy had a new fringe. It would be hard to get used to it. But looked fine as always. Lucy 


was a normal girl, pretty. People used to like her, even though she was a little bossy at 


times. She was taller than me. Above all, she was great.



“We missed you too, Miranda.”



“Of course we did, I couldn't wait to see you!” said Carol.



Carol was dark-haired, curly. She was cute too, many guys liked her. But she was amazing 


in the inside. However, sometimes her pride came above all.



Never mind. They were my best friends and I loved them both.



The bell rang and we entered the building, a new year in which much more things than we



expected waited for us.


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